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Re: Silent Snowflakes
thanx ppl for you replies...i suppose that i did make a few mistakes so thank you for pointing them out. otherwise, i'll take it all into account and work on ...
Jan 24, 2006 -
Re: You're So Beautiful
love the verse with the 'you're beautiful' bit in it...great imagery overall though the rhythm really needs a little work. pretty good, keep writing, ~mez~
Jan 22, 2006 -
Re: Home
i agree with the other reviewers...the idea of spelling home down the side was great. the rhythm and wordin could take a little work but i like the blunt, honest ...
Jan 22, 2006 -
Re: Bond
beautiful wording and overall, a really sweet subject but the rhyming was a little confusing as there is no speciifc rhyme pattern. otherwise, short but beautiful! ~mez~
Jan 22, 2006 -
Re: Fusion
pretty good overall but for me, it was really confusing. the wording was great and the imagery fantastic but there was no proper rhythm in there. great job though! ~mez~
Jan 22, 2006