Frinderman

I loved how well you executed telling this story. I love rhyming and I have to say, you pieced this puzzle of words together almost perfectly to create a rhyming ...

I enjoyed this poem very much, however I found it a bit too repetitive in my opinion. I noticed you had a pattern with your rhymes being four lines then ...

I get the personal application of this very well. Since you asked merely for criticism, the only issues I see right away is maybe using capitalization and a use of ...

I love the emotional expression in this poem, it really connects to me personally. The only thing I see absent with this is maybe a use of commas and capitalization, ...

I personally found this poem very well done and very thought inducing. I found it relatively simple story but it held itself together very well while carrying a large message ...