Freakette

This would make the cutest children's book, I think. I loved this, it was cute and funny at the same time, even though at first glance I thought it would ...

It's rather cute, but kind of... Picture perfect? A bit too movie-like for a real life scenario. I agree with the other reviews, it reminds me of Twilight. However, it's ...

Wow. That was pretty powerful. Great job, it really draws the reader in. I loved the language here, and it sparks a bit of sadness for the main character. Good ...

Wow :D This was a great first chapter. I loved your language and I loved the background you set for Loki. (I'm evil, I like dark pasts... Haha.) Your grammar ...

I do enjoy this story's plot, there's a sense of mystery here that easily catches the reader. c: However, the grammar was a bit off and the sentence structure was ...