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Frances

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Daughter of a Veteran.

    If I could make a poem for this and make it a review I'd say that there's no poems like this, (Well, maybe very few) The subject matter was unique, ...

    Sep 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Grave Stone

    I'll just post a list of things for this one. There's so many little comments I'm sure they'll add up to a thorough review. Elizabeth Ann is a lovely name; ...

    May 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: "Deleted"

    For the following, let me give an explanation: I'm new here, and I'm not precisely sure how these reviews work, so I'm going to go ahead and be honest. If ...

    May 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Falling sadness

    "Just as the petal fall, from a dying rose they trickle down their face... tears." I'm not sure that that part is grammatically correct. Perhaps try, "Just as the petal ...

    May 29, 2013


I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25