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Frances

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Daughter of a Veteran.

    If I could make a poem for this and make it a review I'd say that there's no poems like this, (Well, maybe very few) The subject matter was unique, ...

    Sep 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Grave Stone

    I'll just post a list of things for this one. There's so many little comments I'm sure they'll add up to a thorough review. Elizabeth Ann is a lovely name; ...

    May 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: "Deleted"

    For the following, let me give an explanation: I'm new here, and I'm not precisely sure how these reviews work, so I'm going to go ahead and be honest. If ...

    May 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Falling sadness

    "Just as the petal fall, from a dying rose they trickle down their face... tears." I'm not sure that that part is grammatically correct. Perhaps try, "Just as the petal ...

    May 29, 2013


Don't aim at success--the more you aim at it and make it a target, the more you are going to miss it. For success, like happiness, cannot be pursued; it must ensue, and it only does so as the unintended side-effect of one's dedication to a cause greater than oneself or as the by-product of one's surrender to a person other than oneself.
— Viktor E. Frankl