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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dear Parents

    Haiyaz. :) I really like this poem, it's very relate able to the way that I feel towards my parents. It has the girl showing that she is mature and ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Truth About Self Harm

    Haiyaz. Very powerful poem, especially to those of us who have formerly self harmed. I really like the way that you did add about how they never check the thighs, ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Cry

    Haiyaz. :) I'm here to give you a review. I really like this poem and it is very relate able. I loved the way that you gave several stanzas listing ...

    Nov 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: The Teenage Mind

    Haiyaz. Wow. This poem is really emotional and realistic. I'm a teen and I totally agree with everything written in this poem. You really did show how each teenage mind ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Curtain Call

    This poem is amazing, I really love the message behind it. What you wrote is entirely true, and I really enjoyed reading it. Although I don't completely understand your second ...

    Oct 22, 2015


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