Foxtail13

This is really good and scary. And you thought this up and i thought i was weird. Remind me to stay away from you :P This is very intense, explains ...

I really like your poem. There is a set through line and it's understandable. The sensory and descriptive writing is really good and in some senses it is very true. ...

I think in this poem you could use more description. I know poems can be short but this doesn't show anything, no emotion, no explanation. It's very sudden and quick. ...

Can i just say I agree with a lot of the things you said. We do depend a lot of technology. lots of people buy newer items to fit in ...

Hello so a review coming your way. I think this is very good and can be expanded. However you could have a look at a few things. Some things are ...