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Foxtail13

  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: Earth's First Blood

    This is really good and scary. And you thought this up and i thought i was weird. Remind me to stay away from you :P This is very intense, explains ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Fantasy Re: Bodies of Roses

    I really like your poem. There is a set through line and it's understandable. The sensory and descriptive writing is really good and in some senses it is very true. ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dead End

    I think in this poem you could use more description. I know poems can be short but this doesn't show anything, no emotion, no explanation. It's very sudden and quick. ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: What We Have Become

    Can i just say I agree with a lot of the things you said. We do depend a lot of technology. lots of people buy newer items to fit in ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: Chapter 1

    Hello so a review coming your way. I think this is very good and can be expanded. However you could have a look at a few things. Some things are ...

    Aug 10, 2014


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien