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Re: Imminence
Hey there! FS to review! I like this. I don't normally go for the short stories, but the first line captured me! And as for the second person, well, I ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Tamarayk House --Prologue
Hey there! I really love this! I can't wait to read the rest of the story! I agree with Edgar, there's nothing really here to criticize, and I've never read ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Where do I find a Green Rose? A Prologue
Hi there! Here to review! First off, I love it! It catches my attention in some unknown way. But its very very good. Second, in the first paragraph, it sounds ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: Death Walked in the Door
OK hi! first off, my name is Tabitha :D . Second, i absolutely love this poem! i agree with untalentedwriter, though, that it needs more drama. maybe use a different ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Thief: Chapter One *Needs help & I hate the title!!*
wow! i like it! so, you said you didnt like the name you had. well, i was thinking after reading this, and here are some of my ideas: 1.Theif of ...
May 15, 2010