Formslipper

I read it, and thought it strangely satisfying. Somehow, you managed to create a meaningful jumble of words, which I could never do. As for all your spoiled questions, I ...

I read it. This is a bit lofty- if not, too much altogether for a modern reader to enjoy. But I thought it was very thoughtful. My only criticism is ...

I read it, and WOW. This seriously felt professional, and actually a lot better than most books I've read. I have no criticism, except what's with the Christian theme near ...

Perhaps there's some kind of humor that I'm missing, or an inside joke that started before I joined YWS, but is this "piece" meant to be a mockery of poetry? ...

I read it, or rather "these." I must say, you have an ethereal style about you. Everything is mystic, intrigued, imbued with literary poise. Sadly, though, we live in a ...

I read it, and it seemed discombobulated... :( Other than that, though, I couldn't stop reading until the end! Try to make it more coherent, but not so coherent that ...

There are many things I plan to accomplish this year - graduating, improving my writing skills (don't need "skills") , and enrolling in college to major in journalism are my ...

I read it. At first, I was like... weird setting, weird situation... But then it kind of settled. I felt like the characters were becoming slightly more realistic. However, their ...

I read it, and enjoyed the humor. As for symbolism, I have not a clue =) It possesses a nature somewhat beyond my understanding, especially some of the parts about ...

I read it, and actually thought it was funny. Not that I disrespect it, but rather that it possesses a profound sort of humor that you may not be aware ...

I read it, Skins! And it was an easygoing read. All of the emotions came naturally, which is something I normally struggle with, so props there. Sentence structure, grammar, etc. ...

I read it. They're good points, skwaag, if all (everything and the universe) is for moot. I hate to say it, but it's not, hence the existence of existence (woah). ...

Go to North Korea. Go to China. Go to Kenya. Got to Germany- Heil Hitler!!!!!!!!!! Nah... Just stay here, in the land of the free and the home of the ...

I read it. First off, I'm not a poet. But if I had this piece as my own, I'd be very proud! However, I somewhat disagree with your message. While ...

I read a lot of it. I think that afternoon makes me a little overly critical or something, because I'm not warming up well to this segment. I'll try reviewing ...