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  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Mystery / Suspense Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 13

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! I was very much expecting this to happen. I really like how we are still in confusion about Claire's going with Daphne. I still ...

    Mar 21, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 10: Queen's Feast

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! I liked how this chapter managed to create that feeling of fighting and overwhelming but yet it seemed to be normal. At first I ...

    Mar 20, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Violet-Clowns,Magic,Murder and lies

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a cool story, overall. Also, my review is going to be a bit different from my general reviews. Long ago,there was a ...

    Mar 19, 2022
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Living Room

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was certainly a new sort of story. I haven't read a lot of stories from the perspective of ghosts, so this was something ...

    Mar 18, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Conrad-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was yet another interesting origin story which presented us with the daring character of Conrad. It seems like he doesn't care for his ...

    Mar 17, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 9: What's For Lunch?

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, this was a LOT. Plot wise, pretty much nothing happened but it still seemed a lot to me. Anyway, one thing which I ...

    Mar 16, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 12

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, this chapter has certainly crossed the length of a novella and is kind of going towards becoming a novel. I actually wonder a ...

    Mar 15, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fangs of snakes and small girls

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was certainly a very interesting story and had a well-developed plot as well. I really loved it! First of all the beginning. Okay, ...

    Mar 14, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 8: Crazy Home, Crazy School

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! The school is certainly not a very cool school. I think we will get some Hogwarts vibe in this school. Not thay we will ...

    Mar 13, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 11

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well this was rather an interesting chapter. I was honestly expecting some revelations to take place but this chapter actually contributed to deepening the ...

    Mar 12, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Lily-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This story was kind of very predictable, to be very honest. In the previous story, we did get to see some character traits of ...

    Mar 11, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 09/03/22

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here and if you have any question, feel free to ask ...

    Mar 10, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Eternity; Chapter one

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! As the first chapter, it was quite good. With the beginning, it was not enough captivating to lead the unwilling readers read the story. ...

    Mar 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Run Away Home- Prologue and Chapter 1

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was certainly a very interesting plot and wprld-building we got to see here. Okay first of all the prologue. I am jot really ...

    Mar 8, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The basement

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Oh. My. God. That genuinely made me terrified. I really like how it all worked out. Into the review now. To the suggestions first, ...

    Mar 7, 2022


The strongest people are not those who show their true strength in front of us but those who win battles we know nothing about.
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