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Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 13
Hey! Forever here with a review!! I was very much expecting this to happen. I really like how we are still in confusion about Claire's going with Daphne. I still ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 10: Queen's Feast
Hey! Forever here with a review!! I liked how this chapter managed to create that feeling of fighting and overwhelming but yet it seemed to be normal. At first I ...
Mar 20, 2022 -
Re: Violet-Clowns,Magic,Murder and lies
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a cool story, overall. Also, my review is going to be a bit different from my general reviews. Long ago,there was a ...
Mar 19, 2022 -
Re: The Living Room
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was certainly a new sort of story. I haven't read a lot of stories from the perspective of ghosts, so this was something ...
Mar 18, 2022 -
Re: Conrad-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was yet another interesting origin story which presented us with the daring character of Conrad. It seems like he doesn't care for his ...
Mar 17, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 9: What's For Lunch?
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, this was a LOT. Plot wise, pretty much nothing happened but it still seemed a lot to me. Anyway, one thing which I ...
Mar 16, 2022 -
Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 12
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, this chapter has certainly crossed the length of a novella and is kind of going towards becoming a novel. I actually wonder a ...
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Re: Fangs of snakes and small girls
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was certainly a very interesting story and had a well-developed plot as well. I really loved it! First of all the beginning. Okay, ...
Mar 14, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 8: Crazy Home, Crazy School
Hey! Forever here with a review!! The school is certainly not a very cool school. I think we will get some Hogwarts vibe in this school. Not thay we will ...
Mar 13, 2022 -
Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 11
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well this was rather an interesting chapter. I was honestly expecting some revelations to take place but this chapter actually contributed to deepening the ...
Mar 12, 2022 -
Re: Lily-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This story was kind of very predictable, to be very honest. In the previous story, we did get to see some character traits of ...
Mar 11, 2022 -
Re: 09/03/22
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here and if you have any question, feel free to ask ...
Mar 10, 2022 -
Re: Eternity; Chapter one
Hey! Forever here with a review!! As the first chapter, it was quite good. With the beginning, it was not enough captivating to lead the unwilling readers read the story. ...
Mar 9, 2022 -
Re: Run Away Home- Prologue and Chapter 1
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was certainly a very interesting plot and wprld-building we got to see here. Okay first of all the prologue. I am jot really ...
Mar 8, 2022 -
Re: The basement
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Oh. My. God. That genuinely made me terrified. I really like how it all worked out. Into the review now. To the suggestions first, ...
Mar 7, 2022
