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Hey! Forever here with a review!! Woahhhhhh! This was just awesome. I really liked this chapter and I think this is the best chapter of all the chapters I have ...

Heyyy!Forever here with a review! Her face betrayed no emotion Ah, I really like the word choice here. Though Harry is not the enemy of Aria, but I think the ...

Heyyyy! Forever back here with a review!! This was quite an interesting chapter(or rather part)with a lot of things happening here(again). The first chapter seems to be quite action-packed. Definitely

Heyyy! Forever here for a review!! Minute mistakes: “That’s what I was about to tell you genius,” she snapped, before continuing in a softer tone,” Sorry, this is a bit ...

Heyyyy! Forever here with a very very short review!! Characters: Ah they were so realistic and so believable. I really liked the characters. It's great how you portrayed the emotions ...

Heyyyy!! Forever here with a short review!! First of all, a tiny nitpick: This shall be interesting Do we use shall with this? I doubt. Now, I have never read ...

Heyyyy!!! Forever here for a review!! This piece was a little confusing. The reviews below me says it is a flash fiction, I am not quite familiar with that. So, ...

Heyyy! Forever here for a review!!! The aliens didn't care at all about keeping everyone's living areas in good condition but they certainly wanted everything else to be in top ...

Heyyyy HarryHardy!! Forever here with a review! Thought I should start from the very beginning. Aria looked him up and down. This kind of sounds weird, I think. Maybe just ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Your work seems to be 19 days old XD Clarity: At first I was a little bit confused about what is going on in ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! The town's girls my age always whispered about strange little Alice and her eerie older brother. There will be a 'of' in between girls ...

Heyyyy! Forever here with a review!! Cliffhanger. I love these nice little cliffhangers at the end. They contribute to the continuation of the story. I am quite eager to know ...

Heyyyyy! Forever here with a review!! Having walked for hours, I’ve realized how chained to my old life I had been. Harold always said we had no other choice, but ...

Heyyyy! Forever here for a review! This was a peaceful chapter. I like the soothing tone and calming style of your writing. That somehow sets the mood of the story. ...

Heyyyy! Forever here with a review! Something which I like about your writing is you don't provide details of the past. I mean you don't recapitulate the past incidents. Somehow ...