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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The True Story of the Big Bad Wolf

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a very reflective piece we got to read here. Anyway, let's get into the review!! Okay, first and foremost, I would like ...

    Jan 21, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 5

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, this was a very interesting part of the chapter. Things are going very well. As expected, Daphne seemed to understand Claire very well ...

    Jan 20, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Auburn’s story-Eloise-The demented doll woman

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, this was a very interesting one. Finally, we got to know why Eloise had that sort of behaviour towards children. Never in my ...

    Jan 19, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Crystal’s story-Eloise the demented doll woman

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Okay so this kind of felt similar to another origin story of Lycidas. I don't think we got to see a lot of important ...

    Jan 20, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Tale of the Shade Squad-Part One, Chapter Two

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an interesting chapter we had here. The history that we got to see here is definitely very interesting and the story promises ...

    Jan 20, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 4

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Oh this was an interesting part. I liked how your description actually gave a spoiler of what might happen in this part. Anyway, let's ...

    Jan 18, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 3

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well, this was a pretty good part we had here, I quite enjoyed reading it but I wonder about how necessary this part actually ...

    Jan 15, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Tale of the Shade Squad-Part 1, Chapter 1

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! As a first chapter, this was a pretty intriguing piece we had here. I think it sets the mood of the story and also ...

    Jan 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Tired

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Okay I think that this was an excellent piece we had here. It presents to us a very realistic scenario that the present generation ...

    Jan 13, 2022
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: No Title

    Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! This was kind of a reflective piece we had here. I quite enjoyed reading this. Let's get into the review. Well, I liked ...

    Jan 16, 2022
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: amp fire 911 (introduction)

    Heyy! Forever here with a review!! Okay first of all I would like to say that it is very much necessary that you divide it into paragraphs. The text simply ...

    Jan 17, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Alessandra and Jayden-The car crash

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This, without doubt is the shortest story ever that I am going to review(if that can actually be written). Okay I think that this ...

    Jan 12, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 2

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! These were slower parts till now. I can see something happening in the near future but as of now, the river of climax is ...

    Jan 11, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 1

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! I don't have much to say about this chapter. So, let's get into the review. Finally, finally, she has reached Berlyne. That's actually a ...

    Jan 10, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Survive (1: The Break)

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! As long as the first chapter is concerned, this was a pretty intriguing beginning we had here and honestly, it was an excellent one ...

    Jan 9, 2022


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