ForeverWarrior

Your welcome! I meant to say italicize something BTW.

Have you read the other chapters leading up to this?

Thanks a lot! I made a typo with the sit down line so I'll fix that.

Thanks. All the students are working in some field, but still going to school at the same time. Generally, they work on the weekends, but some of the more advanced ...

Thanks!

Thanks. I'm glad you were able to catch onto the character and what is going on. By the way, her name is Selene. I'll have to work on the suspense ...

Thanks! The first time I wrote it, Selene had been way too rebellious towards her superior officer. Plus, I didn't really know a way to make to make the one-eyed, ...

It must have published it. It's a revised first chapter

B?!?!?!?!? YOU'RE CURIOSITY CAT?????

Thanks. Currently, I am having an English teacher review a new version that has more details. Thank you for the grammar correction I totally missed that!

Curiosity Cat, I love your picture!

Thanks. I do understand that with the whole militia thing. I truthfully have no idead how military rankings go, and I'll look into it. I'll also add an explanation for ...

That whole part was supposed to show she deeply dislikes him but for unknown reasons, which are revealed later in the book. I also don't want this to be a ...

Thank you!

I liked the idea for this, though I don't necessarily support the message! I haven't seen a haiku on this topic. I liked that it followed the traditional haiku format. ...