Forestqueen808

Hi! I'm gonna be your reviewer for today! (I like Twilight so might as well you know?) Die.Die. You need a space in between the two dies. Also, put it ...

Hey A.M.! I shall be your reviewer for today! I was really excited to read this, I LOVE sci-fi and this looked interesting. “Hey, how’s it going, Lyra?” she asked, ...

Hi Tennisprincess! I'll be your reviewer for today! As a child I'd wake to crisp Canadian winters It would flow better if it was: "As a child I'd wake to ...

Hi captain.classy! Here is your review as promised! Over my friends shoulder, It should be: Over my friend's shoulder Don't add the comma I don't think you need a pause ...

Mage! HI!!! I'm gonna review this real fast! I began to walking, but something was wrapped around my leg. I looked down it was a rope and it was wet. ...

Hi! I'm Forest and I will be your reviewer today! who worshiped her people very much. Do you mean: Who was worshiped by her people? It kinda confused me. One ...

Well Irish- It seems like you got some reviews so I'm gonna just comment. This was awesome and I had actually just turned on So Cold by Breaking Benjamin right ...

Hi! I'm Forest and I will review your work today! I didn't see anything to correct, which made me mad! (No offense!) I really liked this poem, especially the last ...

Hi EmmaLee! Its my turn to review yours now! word would leap I think you should put "will" instead of would, since your story is present tense...well essay. That was ...

Hi! Okay I know what a haiku is, but I usually think the first two lines describe the thing and the last line kinda says what it is. But with ...

This was interesting. I liked the rhymes, and I think you did a good job on that. I kinda get the pain caused by her own hands part, but I ...

Yay!!! You said there was a second part, will that be it? Just checkin. Anyways, I liked this, and lemme say, it will have some competition in the contest. Like ...

That was really great! I liked it a lot. I could feel the anger and I was listening to the song while I read it, and I could totally imagine ...

Hi its me Forest and I will be your reviewer today! This was really good except the last stanza: Then she turned around as if sensing hesitation when the bleachers ...

Hi! I really liked this piece I only saw one thing that really bugged me! And other I will fall! I think you mean, "And another I'll fall!" or something ...