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Hey Storm! I really liked this peice, I

Hello Mackenzie! I see you are a new member, welcome! Okay, this was awesome!!! It totally made me think of when I'm getting papers corrected. :D Anyways, the only thing ...

Hello TheStorm! I'll be your reviewer for today! Okay, so I didn't find all that many nitpicks. And me, having my grandfather fight in WWII I really felt something. I ...

Hey Timmy! I'll be your reviewer today! Okay, so yeah, you may want a new name. Arwen is the princess in Lord of the Rings (which I am an expert ...

I love this! I absolutly love it, I think a tear just fell from my cheek. It was so sweet and just made me think. I love it, its gorgeous. ...

Hello! I'll be your reviewer for today. I didn't find any nitpicks, and I loved it. I kinda hate reviewing long things, and this was a great beginning. I love ...

Hi Layla! I'm here to review your story and I'm gonna do it in a pretty pretty purple why? Because, I can. :elephant: Ugh, why do I have first period ...

Hey Crescent! I'm here to proclaim my awesome review! Okay 1. I don't think you need the prologue. You could just add that to chapter one, but its your choice. ...

Kanen! I love this, you really had great emotion, I love this line: Tristan, you better love her with all your heart. It just totally made my heart melt, cause ...

Ellie! I come to review! Okay, this is a haiku, which means it is short. But its good. Its really good, not that there is much to say. It was ...

Hi RedBird! I'll be your reviewer for today! First off, change "Prologue" to "Preface" Prefaces are shorter and yours is more of a preface than a prologue. I hastily start ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I'll be your reviewer for today! IV hooked up to my arm.. I didn't know if the double dots was an accident or not, but take ...

Hi there! I'll be your reviewer for today! Chance and I sit on his couch, watching my favorite move, Up, and eating popcorn and candy. Classic, UP. XD I didn't ...

Hey Autuer! Here is my promised review!!! couch towards the Door uncapitilize "Door" I could a glimpse of hard "I caught a glimpse of hard..."? I couldn't find any other ...

Hi! This was really great! I was just kind of thinking about stuff like this, you know, a certain tree, a pond, or in this case a field. Your rhyming ...