Forestqueen808

Hello ZebraSkittles! I'll be your reviewer for today! ( I absolutely love historical fiction!) Nitpicks I closed my eyes, trying to remember spring. Fresh clean breezes come to mind, along ...

Hi Allessandre! I'll be your reviewer for today! This is a prologue, but I don't know where it will go, I know its short, but I will add more. First ...

Hello babymagic18! I'll be your reviewer for today! "So, what happened on the afternoon of October 31st?" the officer asked. I had to tell him the story which really isn't ...

Hello blackscar! Welcome to YWS! I'll be your reviewer for today! Okay, first off, this needs to be reformated, like this. we begin strong with all the valour, praise and ...

WOOKIE!!!!! I SHALL REVIEW THIS POEM FOR YOUR FRIEND!!!! As an act of service in the name of hot movie stars. :wink: Okay Nitpicks, here we go... Actually not really ...

Hello kitrosemon13! I'll be your reviewer today! Are you with me, to see it? Take out the comma after me. That was the only thing really. This was interesting, the ...

Hey Shadowlight! I'll be your reviewer today! Nitpicks of the princes milk white steed should be: "of the prince's milk white steed" “Do not fear I shall save you from ...

Hello helover97! Welcome to YWS, I'll be your reviewer for today! Okay, so I didn't find any nitpickies, except, well, maybe a few uses of apostraphes here and there. There ...

Hey kitrosemon13! Welcome to YWS and I'll be your reviewer for today! This was a really great poem, and I can tell that tons of feeling went into this. This ...

Hello cheesec4ke! Welcome to YWS! I'll be your reviewer for today. This was short, but short poems are sometimes the most meaningful. I felt tears swell up in my eyes ...

Hi mackenzie! I'm back to review your work! Okay, I didn't find any nitpicks, but on the other hand, I'm not really picky. Anyways, this was really good. I found ...

Hello Pazey13! Welcome to YWS! I'll be your reviewer for today! Nitpicks Still breathing heavily, he pulled out the orange he'd had concealed in his thin jacket. it should be, ...

Hi Seibhris! Welcome to YWS I'll be your reviewer for today! “Then god be with us all" capitalize "god". That was the only grammatical problem I found. Okay as in ...

Okie dokie Johnny Boy you reviewed my poem, I review yours. Okay, so I am not nitpicky, so you will probably have to get other reviews. Anyways, I thought this ...

Ohmygosh, I heard about this and this seriously brought tears to my eyes. You really showed emotion in this peice. Right after I went into the kitchen and hugged my ...