Flux

Aw, thanks everyone! You're too kind! :blush:

Thanks for reviewing! I agree that 'Death' isn't everything, but still, I figured that he'd think he was. I believe in the Lord, so technically he is everything. Anyways, thanks ...

Thanks chinchillagirl! Here's a picture of Rock Lee, in case you're wondering. If you thought that was funny, his appearance should make you laugh even more. Just look at the ...

Thanks for reviewing! There really was no point to it, actually. I just wanted to write something with Death. The description of Death in Cornelia Funke's Inkdeath was amazing. I ...

I always thought of her as the loving sombre mother who would always protect me and keep me safe and seeing her here, looking the most vulnerable I have ever ...

Yeah, so I decided to read this, just 'cause. (XD) So basically everyone else has picked out the stuff I picked up. A few spelling errors, here and there, but ...

Ha ha! Thanks. I was just upon random occurance that I stumbled upon my chapter in the first page of the fantasy section. I was surprised I even got a ...

Hey! i think a few semi-colons were unnecessary, but that's okay! Hey, I see you only have one review! Oh, the humanity! Please, remember the 2:1 ratio: For every two ...

Thanks guys for your help! I'll keep that in mind. and Incognito Temptation, you're easily disctracted my alot of things, so maybe its hereditary, but i'll keep the whol "putting-pronunciations-at-the

Whoops. ^ Jacob... JACOB hit on the new born... not the actor.

Thanks, "Incognito Temptation". xD I'm glad for the constructive critcism. and aren't you always lazy? Anyways, the second chapter includes more description of Nostariel. No worries. And yes, some of ...