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Re: I Wouldn't Change You
Hello there! So basically, reading through, I found that this was just a really great poem for someone to read, especially if they feel like they're always getting the short ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: Suicide
What a magnificently absurd way to put it -- and I don't mean that in a bad way. This is such a terrible thing for me to be reading on ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: Potty Breaks.
So, I decided to read this simply because of the title -- it reminds me of "Body Break", with that atrocious eighties music ... Anyways, onto the review. So me ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: The truth about teachers
Yay for crazy Drama teachers! DANNY: Yep. She's out hunting at the moment to make sure she doesn't end up sucking one of the students blood. You know what those ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: deleated
Hello there! I decided to take a glance at this one seeing as I literally just wrote a short scenario in a guy's perspective, and basically he was complaining about ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: The Toothpaste Tragedy
This could be a Listerine commercial or something ... Maybe Oral B. Anyways, onto the review. I picked this simply because it's called a "Toothpaste Tragedy". How many tragedies involving ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Postmortem
It is suddenly very understandable why you have two feature works. And that is an understatement. Really, you quite literally are almost brilliant. I mean "almost" as in "When-I-read-one-more-of-your-
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: An Insomniac's Poem
This is pretty sweet. I love the idea of it. And the title is like a little memoir, almost. My favourite verse, I think, was this one: Look upon me ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: When the world finally goes silent
I know nothing of poetry, so this was cool. I thought it had a very real, cool take on this. It brought us into everything, to see how things had ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: I'm just a fish
Aw ... poor fishy! D; This is a very interesting perspective for a poem, however. It's very true for a lot of things in todays society -- we do but ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: Weathermen
Hey, so I think this is actually great. I love the descriptions that you're providing; very relatable and accurate. Dad would worry about forest fires. Until the rain came, anyway. ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Sweet Sixteen
Hey! So, I think I agree with Kakagirl about the title. It wasn't a "sweet" sixteenth birthday, really. But I guess it could be used as a sarcastic pun of ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: The Moon's Jealous Revenge
So, I really liked this. It's quite interesting. I thought it was cool to think of it this way -- as some way of the moon's seeking revenge. I thought ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: All because of a boy. . .
At the end of the names ate little things lime this *. What about limes? So anyways, Hiya, hey there, hola, greetings, salutations, aloha, bonjour, guten tag, et cetera. I've ...
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: ~Raining in February~
Hiya! Such a cloudy, February day. Mind my grammar ... But shouldn't this just be "Such as cloudy February day"? OVERALL: Actually, this has sparked some intrigue. I like the: ...
Jul 16, 2009
