Flower~Child

I think that you need to put this into better stanza's or nobody is going to review this. Once you do let me know. -Flower-

I love this! I love the rhyme sceme used in it, and all the emotion you put into it. I don't see anything that I don't like in it. So ...

Thanks! And I love your poem BowLove it is really pretty! Anyway this is by far my favorite as well, and I don't know why.

Thank you for all the reviews, I really appreciate it. Anyway I don't know what lines would look better in it. I could give a story or something. I can ...

Finally I read the third one, but I didn't like it as much as inkspell. I cried when dustfinger died, but when they brought him back I was so happy.

Thank y'all, and what did I comment that you didn't like? Oh and I did misspell that ah I will go back and fix it.

Thanks for the review I will try to work more. I was just really bored and wanted to write. If you could relate to it, it might be better. I ...

I like this poem. I can relate with you on this to an extent. Oh well I don't think I can tell you how to improve better than the person ...

I really like this, I can see the things happening. It also gives a good sorta twisted message. Oh and yes I have always cared.

I really like this. I guess you can't really review what you really like can you. Great job. -Flower-

Well don't get mad or anything :(. Haha yeah it was ok, it needs a little work.

I really don't get this. Crawling on the floor doesn't help claustrophobia. If you could explain maybe I would get it, but right now I don't.

Thank you it was really to rushed. I need to spend more time on stuff like imaginary and rhyming.

I am speechless haha. This was amazing! I can't think of anything bad to say.

Yeah this has a Twilight feel to it haha. I do like it though, it is very good.