Flower~Child

Very discriptive, I think you could make it more interesting and not as slow though.

I like this, I think it could flow better though, and it could give more imaginary. You should make it more alive, why do you want the person to be ...

I love this, it is amazing, sure it could flow better but it is original and I love it.

I like this and it was stong to me until the last line. I don't think the last line ties in with this. Otherwise great dob.

Thank you silented :) when I work on it I will send you a better copy.

Thank you it was just something that came off the top of my head. It does need to be longer and I might work on it later.

I liked this poem. I don't know why but I just to. I would like to read more of your work.

You have done it again silented. You awed me. I love this poem, but like they said the 2 by 4 didn't fit. Other than that it is amazing.

Thank you for the review. I will take your advise on that. I don't think poetry is my stong suit as you can tell.

Alright review time. I love this, it is so sad but so real. I see a lot of typo's though. I think if you fix them it will be a ...

Ok, review time. I like this a lot. I get the feeling of it, and you make it feel real. Some of the lines don't flow very well though. Besides ...

I love this I really can't review it becasue I love it so much.

Thank you for the review. I will work on a reason for those lines and make it a poem and then I will post it up.

Thank you very much! I really do need to do that to this so I will try and see what I come up with and post it later.

haha I liked them I still have to read the last two but I am getting there.