Flower~Child

Ok. Here as requested friend! I am going to try and review this from memory, because I read this earlier. I want to start off by saying that this is ...

Well hello there, here as requested! The first thing I noticed in this poem, is that it doesn't have nice flow. It is kind of skippy and really jumps subjects. ...

Hey there, here as requested! Sorry I am so late, I have been very busy. (Pt. 1) I - Paradoxes It was a dull afternoon in late autumn when you ...

Here as requested! Ok. Well, the first thing I noticed was the capital letters at the beggining of every line. In this poem in particular it was quite annoying. It ...

Hey there, here as requested. We created a club.....FOLLOW! . AMY The screeching of the chalk against the blackboard coincided with the prom night being replayed inside my head. The ...

Hey there, Flower here as requested. Sorry I am so late. Here's the Club for the novel, join us: Page If I could have gone into my heart that night, ...

Hey, Steph, here as requested. I wanna start by saying that I adore this piece, but I am going to try to be of help. Beware of the darkness, they ...

Hello there my friend, and thank you for the request! I am very sorry I took so long, I have been busy. Now then down to business. The first thing ...

It hit me like a bullet; a bullet that was shot straight into my ear drum, forcing its way in so that the sounds couldn’t echo. I actually had to ...

Flower here as requested! Thank you for the request! FIrst of all I want to say I liked this. It isn't anything really new though. I have heard this concept ...

Hello my friend! Flower here, and I will be your first reviewer it seems. One thing that I noticed throughout the poem is the constant repitition. Sometimes repition works, but ...

Hey Tiger, here as requested! I would have been your first reviewer, but I had to sand a cabinet...sorry for the wait. You are never more alive than the moment ...

Hello there, Flower here as requested! I am happy that I have been chosen as your first reviewer for this poem. On My Reflections of the Hero In tales told ...

“Forget safety, let’s just take the sonic-train to school!” Kevin mutters. I don't really get what you mean by "forget safety" here. What is so unsafe about a sonic-train? He ...

Flower here, as requested by you :) I want to start by saying that I love this as a prologue. I typically don't read them, one because they can never ...