Flower~Child

Dear silented, I have missed your work so much. I enjoy reading it so much! This just made my day. I really only have one comment that I will post ...

I've been meaning to give you a review on this all day, so now I have settled down and decided to do so. My name is Flow by the way. ...

Hey there Ranger :D Here to make a review. I don't know how helpful it will be, but I will try my best! The Voice In My Head I heard ...

I like this, but it is hard to understand. I think that you meant he was sick with tuberculosis? I don't know how to spell it, but that's what it ...

(Wipes tears out of my eyes) I have sat here for an hour and thirty minutes reading your whole story. I was only planning on reading one of the chapters, ...

Flower here as requested. Hope I can be helpful here. First thing I am going to work on is your format. I really think you need to consider fixing this ...

I think that you should take theotherone's advice and set your story up like that. It read's so much easier, that is actually what I read in order to make ...

Here as requested! I'm not going to comment on the grammer or punctuation because that has already been done. I am just going to go over general content. I loved ...

Hey there Flow here for another review. Sorry for the lateness, busyness you know. The Frozen Heart There in the bottom of the ice pool lays the frozen heart. I ...

Flower here as requested. I am so sorry about how late I am. I have been very busy. The Dream Hunter His cloak is dark as the night. I think ...

Hey there, Flow here as requested. Ok, so I read what you posted before the story, and I think that as far as the setting goes you should put that ...

Ok, well I have so many reviews to do, but I loved your peice so much that I thought I would review it. I could really relate to this, and ...

Hey there! Flow here as requested, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I do like this peice. I did see a few errors, and I will point ...

Alright, Flow here as requested. I am going to try my best to be helpful here, so here goes nothing. I really do like this. You give good decription, and ...

Hey dear, here as requested! I'll go ahead and go through the story and review like that first. CHAPTER 1 Today was the day, I thought , Today was Omit ...