Flower~Child

I see that you have many reviews already, and I will review the rest later, but I wanted to commment on this. I really like this, but I've never read ...

Hey there Jashy :) Flow here as requested by you :) So I'm not really going to comment on grammatical errors, because in all reality there wern't that many. The ...

The thing that drew me here was the fact that you said this was a love poem. I simply dread most of them because like you said, they are all ...

Ok, Flow here as requested! To be honest I don't think you have moved things along very much. I think this could have been added to the last chapter because ...

Hey there, Flower here as requested! The first thing that I noticed about your peice is your lack of indentions. This really distracted me because it makes it look sloppy. ...

Hey there, Flower here and I will give you a quick review here. One of the main things that I noticed here is that right in the middle it's almost ...

Hey there Jash! OMG I totally loved this, it was amazing! I'm not really sure that I can review this. I am known for the one who can pick stuff ...

Prologue . When she couldn’t walk any more, she fell onto her knees and started sawing the ice. It wasn’t that thick, so her short knife made a large dent. ...

Flow here for your review! [quote="Boolovesyou"] The Weeping Willow Alone I stand, On solid ground. Beneath my many branches, To me this is really difficult to understand and it doesn't ...

Hello my dear friend! I am going to give you a line by line review *pops fingers* So here we go. I think first off your flow is a bit ...

It seems that you have many nice reviews already, so I will just give my overall opinion. Sorry for being late by the way. Mask Who is that who wears ...

Flow here as requested on this fine afternoon! Ok, well as far as the subject and the plot goes I like it. it moves at a very slow pace though. ...

Hey there, Flow here as requested. Sorry it took so long. So it seems that you already have some pretty nice reviews, I am going to admit now though that ...

Can You See Me? ~ Chapter One Maxxie warily stepped one foot out of the window, glancing back into his bedroom for a moment. One small slip up, one noise, ...

Hey there Jash. I see that you have many nice reviews so I will just give you my honest opinion.] First I would separate these a bit more. You gave ...