Flower~Child

Hello there, Reuben. Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening, since you requested me that is. I want to start off by saying that I really ...

Hello there sicklee! Flower here, as requested by you of course! Now then that introductions are at ease let me start my ramble. I want to let you know first, ...

I really liked this. My boyfriend smokes, and it's not just a cigarette a day kind of thing. He smokes all the time, and if he doesn't have one he ...

Hey Lukan! Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I want to start by saying that I like this. I think that you did very well ...

Hey there Hawkie! Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. One thing I noticed is that this is really short. I don't feel that the last ...

Hey there, Imnotperfect! Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. He was driving smoothly; I don't know that I really like the word smoothly written here. ...

Hey there, Flower here as requested, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. First off one thing that I noticed, is that you have no description here. You ...

Flower here, finally I have found the right poem. I am truly and deeply sorry for the mistake. I also want to apologize for being late, I never thought I ...

Hello there BlueAfrica! First of all before I begin my review I want to appologize for taking so long. I have been very busy! Five test tomorrow is the kind ...

Hello BlueAfrica! My name is Flower, it seems you are new to YWS, welcome! I saw the review you gave me on my poem, and I want to thank you ...

Hello there, my name is Flower, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I want to start out by saying that I really loved this poem, certain parts ...

Well, I hate to be the mean reviewer today haha, but honesty is greatest is it not Steph? Anyway on to the review. The first thing I noticed is that ...

Hey there MadHatter, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the morning. I want to start off by saying that, this is a really short poem, I think ...

Hey there Becca, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for the afternoon! Two sets of stairs, but I soar to the top. Three hallways down, yet I still ...

I really did like this poem, but like the others said it is really forces. I would suggest leaving the rhymes, and going to freestyle. That is if you can't ...