Flightless

Hullo, I shall be reviewing your short story today. I must say, the first few paragraphs perfectly describe me. You've probably described a good portion of the teenage girl population, ...

First off, I must say that I love the oxymoron in the title. It's my favorite oxymoron after jumbo shrimp. This poem is simple, but it is also simply lovely. ...

Wow. Just wow. This is beautiful! In that sort of tragic, lovers-separated-and-reaching-for-each-other sort of way. "Oh, through the months we gleefully played, pranced down the soft grassed meadows.

Reading "The Pants on the Floor" sadly makes one think filthier thoughts... But, in stead of a slightly - ehem - dirtier poem, this one is by far better than ...

This is lovely. It tugs at the heartstrings, it does. Though, there are some spelling errors, which bothers a perfectionist like myself. It makes me think of Jane Eyre for ...

In the wonderful words of Nine - Fantastic! I absolutely love anything fantasy-related. Nymphs, dragons, princes, armor, dragons, dragons, dragons... I love it all! I really like it. It does ...

Unlike previous reviews, I think it's hilarious that the Sims aren't talking "English." In the games the Sims don't talk, so why should they in stories? It's comedic and it ...

Interesting... The poem seems to skip a bit, but I can tell that it all talks of the same thing. I don't understand the first stanza all to well though, ...

Have you ever read "The Night Circus"? It's a favorite book of mine. Your poem reminds me a lot of it. It's very fanciful, very elegant, I think. The lines ...