FlamingPhoenix

I'm glad you liked it Harry! I was really having a hard time with this chapter! I thought I should change it up to the last one I wrote in ...

Thank you for the review MoonIris. I think I should tell you this, I'm not writing this vision of the story anymore I've just started rewriting it and I have ...

:D Will do!

Thank you so much for the review! I really needed this! I'll take all this to heart and go and patch it all up as soon as I get the ...

:D I'll try and get the next chapter written as fast as I can!

Thanks for all the pointers! I'll go fix them soon! This chapter isn't really a mystery to you because you read my other book. So you know who the guy ...

:D Okay then!

Thank you for the review and pointing out those small things! I'll go and fix that right away! I'm glad I could describe the village with out showing it! That ...

I'm glad I could help! :D

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Yay!

Your welcome! Oh right I forgot about that! XD I should have known! Anyway I look forward to the next chapter! I'm glad I could help!

No problem! I'm glad I could help you out! Even though there is a few issues I still really love this chapter! I have me hooked!

Thank you so much for the review! I'll make sure to tag you when the next chapter is posted! I'm afraid I can't spoil anything for you so you will ...

Thank you for the helpful review! I'll keep all that you have said in mind for later chapters! And I'll most likely some back to this chapter later and edit ...