FlamingPhoenix

I'm really happy you are liking the changes so far. :D I had to think over how I could make the story better for a while. One of the things ...

Thank you for the review! It was very helpful as normal! I have been having a little trouble with writing at the moment, and this draft may not be as ...

Thank you for the review Harry! XD I'm so sorry you have to read this for the third time. But hopefully it will be worth it, I am trying a ...

Thank you so much for the review! It was very helpful like always. :D I know this chapter isn't perfect, as you know I was having a lot of trouble ...

Thank you, I'm glad you like it, and Welcome to YWS.

Thank you so much for the review, and for being honest. I do understand that Richard comes across as a perfect character right now, but I'm hoping that the further ...

XD I look forward to what you will come up with. :D

Hehe I'll just keep you hanging now. ;)

:D Me too! I'm hoping there will be some surprises down the line that you didn't see coming.

Thank you so much for the review! It was as much fun to read as always! I'm glad you found this prologue better than the last one, I worked really ...

Thank you for the review Andrew! I'm super glad you dropped by for a read! I'm really glad you want to see more of Damien, that was the kind of ...

Thank you so much for the review! It was very helpful! I was having a little trouble with this chapter for some reason, so when I go back and edit ...

Why didn't you cry? You have no heart.... T-T

Thank you for the review Doss.

Thank you for another great review! I'm gad your enjoying the story so far! Lol yeah I've been trying to bring across some character development in little bits at a ...