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Re: Atravesar
Hello, FlamingPhoenix here on this lovely day to help get your work out the green room. Okay so I think this is a really amazing story you have here. I ...
Feb 21, 2019 -
Re: Dream Deffered
Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day. Let's get to it. So I'm going to just right into the review. Okay, so out of the ...
Feb 20, 2019 -
Re: Jilly (2)
Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day. Let's get to the review. Mistakes Okay so I'm going to start off with the things I saw ...
Feb 20, 2019 -
Re: Welcome to YWS
Hello, FlamingPhoenix here again with a review for you on yet another poem. Let's get to the review: So let's start off by saying I really, really loved reading this ...
Feb 19, 2019 -
Re: Soul Cutters Chapter 5
Hello, it's me again FlamingPhoenix with another review for you on this lovely day. Let's start with the review: What I like Now first off I loved this line. Nothing ...
Feb 19, 2019 -
Re: Soul Cutters Chapter 4
Hello, FlamingPhoenix here again with a review for you. What I like So I think you have done really well with this chapter. It's much longer then your other ones ...
Feb 18, 2019 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 8
Hello, I'm here yet again with a few words about your story. First thing first...why do you keep avoiding the PLAN? I was really looking forward to finding out what ...
Feb 17, 2019 -
Re: Soul Cutters Chapter 3
Hello, FlamingPhoenix here to do another review for you on your chapter on this lovely day. So I'm going to try and make this review short, but I'm not sure ...
Feb 16, 2019 -
Re: one, alone
Hello fraey, FlamingPhoenix here on this lovely day to help get your work out the Green Room. I will have to say this poem is so emotional, and it feels ...
Feb 15, 2019 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 28
Hello Shady, FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you. Let's get to it. Over all I think your story is coming along really well, and I can't see anything wrong ...
Feb 15, 2019 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 12.3
Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day. This is a really good chapter here, I know I haven't reviewed your chapters for a wile so ...
Feb 14, 2019 -
Re: do you
Hello soundofmind, FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day. So let's get right to the review: So everything in this song was just amazing. Everything just ...
Feb 13, 2019 -
Re: Soul Cutters Chapter 2
Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day. Let's get down to the review: What i like Again I think you started this chapter off really ...
Feb 13, 2019 -
Re: searching for a second chance
Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a review on this lovely day. Let's get to it. Now I really like what you have here. I think your really good with picking words, ...
Feb 12, 2019 -
Re: Soul Cutters Chapter 1
Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you. Okay let's get started. So I will start off by saying this is a great way t start the story, it gets ...
Feb 12, 2019