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Yes please, I would love a hug. Thanks for the review, I think you're spot on. It does need some...oomph? Thanks :)

You really hit the nail on the head, there. To begin with, I do distance myself from the writing because it's tough to write about, but I should probably try ...

I'm not accusing you of anything, you don't have to defend yourself. I'm sure you're not being sexist.

I don't get it. It needs way more content. It was probably the shortest story I have ever read that contained that many different things. Why were the people screaming? ...

I just wanted to add that I know referring to a woman that way is pretty standard in rap, and I'm not trying to start a philosophical discussion here.

Thank you :)

Thank you

Thank you :) Tearing flesh from bone flows so much better, thank you!

This is fantastic. Like really really simple. I love it. It's actually funny, and it's almost...fanciful? I'm not leaving a review, because the longer this is in the Green Room, ...

:) I think the thanks is all for you

That would make a lot more sense. I guess I'm just trying to convey that they are so taken by what he said that they don't even want to so ...

Just a comment. After reading C2H60 I decided to check out your other poetry. You've got the gift, dude.

Love it. This is very evocative, I think you have a gift with imagery. I have to disagree with ketr3n. This has a very clear message. Nameless moon, nameless face, ...

Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback :)

Yeah thanks, I actually submitted this from my iPad so I had a few formatting issues. But seriously? Rhyming? I can't even begin to explain how much poems do not ...