Fiyero

Okay, I'm not sure I like this poem. I feel really bad in sayng this, but it's just not all there for me. First of all, your rhyming seems rather ...

I really do quite enjoy this. It's beginning is a little rocky, because you are thrown right in without having an understanding of the characters. However, if you wanted a ...

I really like the melancholy atmosphere of this poem. It definitely stands out because you were able to pull it off so easily. One thing I'd like to say is ...

Wow, this is a much more depressing piece of literature. Very much in contrast to the last part. I like it because of that. It definitely does leave me wondering ...

I was also drawn in by the title, and I think the idea is a good one. The one thing I don't like about this poem is the repetitiveness of ...

I agree with Deanie about the unique setting for this telling of the Beauty and the Beast. However, it doesn't really surprise me that the Minotaur wasn't monstrous because he's ...

This is an interesting poem. You take a unique take on homeless people, longing to have a place of their own. One comment I have is that if a thought ...

This is a very chilling poem, but I was bothered by the flow. The beats in each line was constantly changing as I read, and it was very choppy. It ...

I really like this poem in general. I feel that most of the needed criticism has already been made. Howev, I would like to say that for such an unknown ...

A very nice poem. I like how while reading it, the tone of the poem implies a color scheme of black and grey. Sometimes, colors stick out to me in ...

I really like the idea of this to begin with. Remade fairy tales are always fun to read. I agree with the forced rhyming, so to fix that, you could ...