Fireweed

HI JANE!!! WELCOME TO YWS!!!!!!! :mrgreen: AWSOME poem as usual... i love the rythym, the ryhme, the mood of it, everything... great. i would not change anything at all. i ...

Hey big sista!!!! :D This is really sweet... wonderful imagery.... i like how the ryhme is sort of subtle, it doesnt distract you from the story of the poem. i ...

this is a really intresting poem... you described everything really beautifully and I like the way you worded it. the rhyming seemed a little bit sing-songy or dr. seussish or ...