Firestalker

Firestarter i really do wish i could write like you, your so good at it . i feel jealous sometimes

I like the stories, but its really hard to find them here.(in srilanka)

Heres what i think about the three books Book one - One of the greatest books i read in my life. Book two - Really bad Book three - er... ...

I really prefere HP, but in the films LOTR is the best

I have the whole series in one book. At first it seemed all sooo boring, i didnt even glance at it. then after reading every other book i had i ...

I read some of the books, but its really boring. the only good book is 'Martin the warrior' The other are boring

Yup Garth Nix is the best. I've only read the first book but i loved it sooo much i really want to get the second book. but unluckily i cant ...

Now thats better i can uderstand it better but i still think you should put an indroduction. By the way i like your story no rushing etc.

Uuuuum... good except for your talking about multiple characters. Whats the aim of the story. I'm confused please PM me and i might give a better critic. You should better ...

Now that's a critique. The best in century's. THANKS VERY MUCH. i re-edited it again. GLAD!!!!! you liked it too. A dragonball z fan I presume? Interesting... you presumed right ...

Your right i'll re-edit the story. Glad to hear that you like it.

OOOOOPS Thats the second time this happened. can't someone invent some thing that stops things like the above happening?. SO pay no attention to the above

I agree this will turn out to be a great story. The only bad thing is you seem to have started in the middle of the story. I WAN THE ...

I agree this will turn out to be a great story. The only bad thing is you seem to have started in the middle of the story. I WAN THE ...

THANKS a lot specially Writersdomain Keep posting if anyone has any new tips or helps See ya soon The only thing to fear is fear it self.