Firestalker

Here I am again, yes its the friendly YWS Fire here, ready to start reviewing as requested! Hope I do a good job again, wish me luck :P The review. ...

Hi forgottenfallen, welcome to the best writing site in the world, YWS!! Sorry for being a somewhat like a 'teachers pet' but i have to point out that YWS has ...

Loved it!!! Though a little less comedic when compared to act 1. and here's the review that you've been hating to see :P Irishfire: Um…you are ? I think this ...

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: , nearly laughed my head off reading this, a job well done, all three of you are great at this!! *A portal opens and ...

Loved it! I can relate to the rest of the commenter too, being a not-so-addicted twilight fan, but i seriously loved it! Edward: Oh Bella! My pretty beautiful honey bunches ...

Yay! I can almost smell my delight... or if the appropriate word feel? Anyway, here i am again, ready to deliver to you a very fiery review. It seemed too ...

Hey melvin, nice to meet ya. Great work, you've portrayed the 'poet' well enough and you've done it with accountable rhyming scheme too. The last stanza caught my eyes specially. ...

Hey TrueBroadwaylvr9, I'm your friendly YWS Fire, ready to review your prologue, here goes... Ever felt the feeling of pure perfection? Standing on this beach, I could feel it. Happiness, ...

Hi AddictionToFiction! I hope your ready for a fiery review from yours truly - me! And the review... I went inside and grabbed the glasses off the counter, depositing them ...

Hi Mage, you friendly YWS Fire here. Hope this simple review helps you a lot. What had happened? Down at her feet laid lay German. I'm guessing German is a ...

Yay, I'm the first to review your 5th Chapter too. We meet again Elentari. Oh and by the way i forgot to ask you to PM me when you release ...

And on to chapter four "He seemed to enjoy the thought that the last living member of his family would die, painfully. Isn't he the going to be the last ...

And on I come to chapter three. Rich red and gold brocaded carpet covered the floor, squishing under Cela's feet. A great map of the earth covered part of the ...

Time to review chapter 2! Xavier didn't hurt you too badly, did he Cela?" The man said. and attempts to join everything we've worked for!" He was mad, and exasperated. ...

*Jumps up and down excited* I finally got some time to review the first chapter, yay! Now lets see what you've got up your sleeve shall we... Her copper hair ...