Firerift24

sorry about the italics my that italics tab cut on by accident but i saw it on when i started the next chapters

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Hello! Stegosaurus here for a review! I am glad you are able to share this beginning of your story! I enjoyed the thought of this story also as much as ...

sorry my sister likes to sneak on my account

Hello, steampowered here for a review! I don’t think I’ve ever had the pleasure of reading a Merlin fanfiction, despite the fact I’m a massive fan of the BBC’s Merlin ...

thank you in the second paragraph i am using narrative writing. what i said to the man instead of no i am saying i mumbled quietly a group of words

sorry for the copy my sister got on the computer and signed in and did it for revenge cause i got her in trouble no hard feelings please

in the first sentence of paragraph 2 when you talk about your leg it should say legs instead of leg. forwards should be forward there should be no comma between ...

in the first sentence of paragraph 2 when you talk about your leg it should say legs instead of leg and forwards should be forward there should not be a ...

Good story line does have some line mistakes.needs more description.You need to adjust fonts for him thinking about the homework that is no longer narration.On your sentence Before you knew ...