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Re: Untitled
Good start! Keep going, you have a great story forming.
Oct 12, 2005 -
Re: Wishes (Aimed At Younger Children)
What do you mean?
Oct 12, 2005 -
Re: Romantic Fiction: A Fine Romance
This is nice...I like the way you started it out...good work!
Oct 12, 2005 -
Re: Myopic Hindsight
Em, I don't understand it. Could someone explain it to me?
Oct 11, 2005 -
Re: Wishes (Aimed At Younger Children)
:) It's okay.
Oct 11, 2005 -
Re: First Snow
I like how simple it is, but still conveys your message. Good imagery, I really like this poem. Keep up the good work.
Oct 10, 2005 -
Re: The Man and the Clarinet - Writing challenge 10/2
Wow, great choice of words. I like the way you only wrote one or two words for a line. Good work..
Oct 10, 2005 -
Re: Wishes (Aimed At Younger Children)
Thanks, zelithon, but could you use the spell check? Run-on sentences get on my nerves. And what does conditict mean?
Oct 10, 2005 -
Re: The Gift Of Writing
Thank you for your comment, and yes, I also feel this needs some editing...
Oct 10, 2005 -
Re: The Fisherman and his Daughter
Thisis really good. I like your choice of words and the imagery...
Oct 9, 2005 -
Re: Staring Contest
Haha! Very funny, I really like it. Good work..
Oct 9, 2005 -
Re: If I Died
Yes, I agree with Dream...this poem/bunch of words needs a lot of editing...
Oct 8, 2005 -
Re: Little Ditty
This is a wonderful poem, and I think many writers can relate to this. Most of us are teased or are bullied just because we can WRITE. Writers are the ...
Oct 8, 2005 -
Re: Wishes (Aimed At Younger Children)
Thank you..
Oct 8, 2005 -
Re: Emotional weather
Really nice, I like it a lot. I like the fast pace... I think Bobo's title is pretty good. Another one could be 'Fair Weather'.
Oct 8, 2005