FemmeFatale

Wow, this was really beautiful. The first sentence captured me completely. My favorite line was: Redemption is what I seek. That was perfect. It was simple, but so greatly composed ...

Thank you for all of your reviews! @Demeter: Thanx for your read and comment :-) Actually Isabel is Princess of Italy, and her uncle, King James is King of Italy, ...

Thanks for allof your comments! They really helped me get great points of view. I have enclosed all of my comments (for confetti and WaywardBird) because some of it has ...

@Cresent and Confetti Thanx for your comments! I have deleted that paragraph of the Author's note so as not to confuse people or have them relate it to twilight, because ...

Thank you sooo much guys for all of your reviews! I reeaaallly appreciate it! @Arspoetica: Thanks so much for all of your compliments haha :-). @Wariofart: Yes, the "He" she ...

Thank you so much for your comment @luxevampwolfwithwand! I appreciate it! To start off I know I should have explained more thouroughly so forgive me :-). This is a clip, ...

Haha, thank you so much! :-)

I really like this. I like the way you used similies, metaphors and personifacation to bring the pen to life. Very nice job.