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Re: The Day when being was no longer self and meaning fled the s
Thank you. My influences are the Danish philosopher, Kierkegaard and Existentialism, also, my own observations of how society is spiritually and morally degrading. Essentially, it is a synthesis of so
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Silver Moon
So hey, what’s up...again! This piece has a majestic air to it; I really dig it. Like everyone said: the metaphor about the sun and moon is great. That is ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: A walkers Time Bridge
Yea, theres probably quiet a few mistakes, I wrote it when I was in the 8th grade; it was a report. It was based on impression sunrise by claude monet. ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: That Summer
I would also agree that it sounds like a list more than a poem. It sounds like it would be in the song section.
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: DAY
This poem might be ambiguous in a few areas, I understand that, but I’ll try and explained myself. First: What I am trying to convey is how the city moves ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Guidelines for Thought
Does the rhyming scheme always have to be so stern? If the rhyming scheme is oddly constructed, but applicable, can’t it work?
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: I choose to throw the dice once again...
I found the poem to be insipid. There was not much emotion in the poem to enthral me. I couldn’t get into it; however, I did enjoy the first line ...
Jun 28, 2010
