- Re: Borrowing Flight Jul 28, 2009
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Re: lyric poetry
I really like it, but I also agree wit hawkie. It's an uneven rythum, and there are some gramatical errors. "While his daughter walks down the aisle. And as she ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Mirror-Washing
I like it, but why do you rhyme the last line of one with the first line of the next? It also doesn't flow very well, it seems like your ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: Outlaw
Really good!!!!!! I luv it!!!! I especially like how you describe the myserious man who Kira is in love with!!! I haven't read very far into it, its a lot ...
Jul 27, 2009