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Re: Fists of Fate - Chapter 3 (Emma/Ricardo Arcs)
Wow! I just checked, and as it turns out, the first chapters of TBB (The Bard's Ballad) and FoF (Fists of Fate) have (about) an equal amount of praise in ...
Jun 16, 2018 -
Re: Fists of Fate - Prologue and Chapter 1 (Fox's Arc)
I have made a tiny change with "appearingly". It's been replaced with a human resembling a young, 18-year-old male with kitsune-like physical traits like nine tails and ears." Thanks for ...
Jun 8, 2018 -
Re: The Bard's Ballad Part 6
Wow, looking back on this, I was hard on myself, heh!
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: The Tale of Ye'Dunn: A TBB Tale
I see where you're coming from with this. You see, this is a spinoff of a series I have called The Bard's Ballad. I can't tell if you read it ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: Fists of Fate - Prologue and Chapter 1 (Fox's Arc)
The Fist is powered by someone's worth of being able to use it. The L.C. Corp (as a collective unit) had already proved their worth and got the weapon. BUT, ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: The Tale of Ye'Dunn: A TBB Tale
This is sickening, people shouldn't be doing this on YWS. Either review the story or don't comment on my story.
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: Pencil
He's using a hack that gets him points without him even trying. Heck, he even stole your review and made it his own.
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: Fists of Fate - Prologue and Chapter 1 (Fox's Arc)
Note: There is a glitch on mobile making Fox's description awkwardly spaced between species and backstory. If you review this on mobile, on computers it is normally spaced.
Jun 4, 2018 -
Re: Fists of Fate - Prologue and Chapter 1 (Fox's Arc)
Answers: 1: Luminous Conflux Corp. 2: An ancient Egyptian god (Neith) created it. 3: The Fist was recently discovered, all the other tournaments had cash pools. They were made as ...
Jun 4, 2018 -
Re: A Man Named Simon (A Short Story)
Just a little story I came up with randomly. It's not great, I have to say, but I think it's a fun read nonetheless. -Fantasy76
May 13, 2018 -
Re: Dynamica: Virtual Escape Ch. 1
Also, it's a server in Dynamica, and the name is War-Zone.
May 9, 2018 -
Re: Dynamica: Virtual Escape Ch. 1
Thanks, I fixed the typos and grammatical issues.
May 9, 2018 -
Re: Dynamica: Virtual Escape Ch. 1
Hey, guys! Before making TBB: The Tale of Ye'Dunn, I decided to release a new type of story to keep you busy before the release of TTOY. Please let me ...
May 9, 2018 -
Re: The Bard's Ballad Part 4
I was actually trying to make Ruut feel like a Rocket Racoon, just with different traits, Rocket is my second favorite Guardian.
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: The Bard's Ballad Part 4
Thanks, this was very helpful
Apr 26, 2018
