FangirlDivided

Hello! First things first, wow. This was a very amazing start to a story. I can tell you have taken some kind of orchestra before and I already love Mr. ...

Hello! First off, I'd love to say that this story interested me right of the bat. The steampunkish feel is something I've always loved to read. I also like the ...

Hello! I will say that this story is not quite what I had expected when I read the first little bit but it was definitely interesting. I like how you ...

This is a truly wonderful story. I like how you foreshadow and prepare the reader for what I assume will be the next chapter. You also did a good job ...

Wonderful poem! I like the message of the poem, though I will admit the changing rhyme patterns threw me off a bit. Also some of the lines could be altered ...

This is a great beginning and the futuristic setting is exciting. I did, however notice a couple mistakes. "Novah came to the conclusion that was nothing in the room of ...

Hello! I enjoyed your story a lot. I have a couple pointers that are honestly up to your writing preference. "Why does black mean the absence of color but means ...

Hello! FangirlDivided here with a review! I loved this poem. The fact that you could keep the flow of the words without rhyming is something I see very rarely. The ...

I love that this is an inspirational poem when in all honesty, it could be very depressing. There are some small rhythm in the first stanza. It could just be ...