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Elfstones of Shannarah by Terry Brooks or its sequels. I managed to drudge through LOTR because it held my interest, but this just put me to sleep.

The term Wunderkind (from German: "miracle child" or "wonder child") is sometimes used as a synonym for prodigy, particularly in media accounts, although this term is discouraged in scientific literat

So, which God is that? The God of Overusing Purple Prose, or the God of C***py Dialogue? Is he also going to meet the Demon of Originality by any chance?

Quite an amusing tale actually :). When you said a pigeons favourite pastime, I thought you meant the other one. Bird droppings, anyone?

Hey, thanks for the crits. Yes, Adonis follows the Lord and Kyvor the Shadows. And your crit wasn't bas at all rubric. 'Twas pretty helpful. ;) I'll look at petersburg ...

I've finally gotten around to making the changes you suggested. I can't believe I missed the punctuation x_x. A salute to all you helpful people!

Hello, thansk for the lovely crit. I agree this chapter is pretty shaky, probably my worst one now I look at it. Sorry I've been so late in replying, as ...

Seraphtree-I can understand about not gettin git. You should read the fist chapter to understnad(in portfolio, the one not in parts). Fye- Thanks. i forgot about the word. Chnaged it ...

I've made the changes and thank you all for your crits! I'm such an idiot, making so many mistakes. I'll work on setting ror the next chapter but it's meant ...

Main problem is you start things with 'I' too much. Its the common trap of first person. NO ONE WAS IN IT. -This part does not need to be capitalised. ...

Thank you all for your crits! It appears that I had more transfer errors than I thought. Well, it was rather late at night when I finished with this. I'll ...

You do realise you can edit these posts? (the button on teh top right of the message box. You should add what you've posted to your main story (the first ...

Hey phorcys, thanks for the crit. I am thinking of moving Seth to third person now seeing as my first draft got destroyed. The first person is starting to annoy ...

lol, this is great. Why don't you try out Harry Potter?

Calamity computer broke down and chewed up my first draft. *head/desk* Now this has become draft 1.5. On a brighter note, I've made changes and after reviewing myself, brought a ...