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Re: Childs play part two point five
FANTASTIC!!!!!!! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: That is all I realy have to say!!!!! FANTASTIC!!!!
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Child's play part 2
More Pin Elephants!!!!!! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: I have become rather addictd to yor style. This story is still confusing at parts but it is amazing. Watch fo
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Child's Play Part One
I am surpirsed to be honest. I suppose I am bad at prediction on the behalf of people. This piece is fantastic; dark and thrilling with a laceing of confusion ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Acting
This is amazing to me. it is short but it is true. I have felt like this for a long long time and everything you say in this poem is ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: Trust.
I mean it i to the point but I agree that there needs to be a bit more imagery. Not a lot cause if I a correct you are going ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: Running
:elephant: Well it captured me. am a strong believer in love, that is why I write it. Your piece came to an end far too quickly for me. In my ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: DELETED D
Dude!!!!!! This is a fantastic piece. I was really captured by the mater-of-fact tone that your main character held. You speak the truth which I find a great human value. ...
Aug 23, 2009
