Fall_Into_The_Sky

Ok I have a new favorite writer I read all your stories today. When will there be more.

Please tell me there is more to the story. This last sequence was my favorite. I like the character Topher though... reminds me of my ex except for the trying ...

Pleaze pm me when the next chapter lz out

I might have somthing up my today or tomorro. Depends on how much of my schooling I get done. Plus I kind of messed up my writing hand.. The next ...

Yea I have writers block though so chapter 3 will take some time. I'll probably have it up by next week. This week is the finals etc... of my last ...

Yea I don't get why that would be good revenge. But then again maybe he'll think she was using him now? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hmm I'll try to work out the kinks in this chapter. The next chapter explains more about Damian and about Adeline's father's death. Actually I did use the spelling check ...

in the later chapters it explains the prologue a bit I'll post more soon

Very good writing. Only think I gota ask is he gangster as in the whole baggy pants showing under wear thing? or Just gangster clothes?

When is the next part. And I'm guessing his almost boyfriend is just faking he isn't gay because his mother or someome doesn't approve. Keep up the good work , ...

Hmm i'll try to use both of your suggestions I won't be able to get working on this till later in the week. As I have someone coming to buy ...

Any ideas how I could better make them seem beleivable?

Nice story. Although the cursing fits into the story I think you over did it with the repetition. Maybe changing up the B * * * * to some other ...

the point of the contest it that u have 10 minutes 2 live

Thanks for the critique. I'll see if I can add more to the seaworld part. Actually I don't think I would do that with a child as Amelia did. But ...