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Re: Food Puns Skit
When I worked at a grocery store my friend and I would stock the isles and make food puns and make customers look at us weirdly. I feel that you ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Suicide Smiles
Hola Squirtlepowiee =) FallWolf here for a short review The essence of this story is very deep, which I enjoy. Suicide is a hard concept to write about, I know ...
Feb 13, 2017 -
Re: What Happened to the Dragons?
Really good story felistia!!! I love that you included the flying whales =) The only sort of problems I could find with it is that the old man, who is ...
Jun 15, 2016 -
Re: Getting a Say (Short Story)
Hola EmmaEaton =) Congrats on your first story post! FallWolf here for a short review =) I get the overall idea: the people didn't like to vote for Althea Ronalds ...
Feb 23, 2016 -
Re: The City(1)
Hola Satira, FallWolf here for a review =) Just a note, before reviewing this I looked at your page and follow the "kitten" link you posted way back. ... I ...
Feb 18, 2016 -
Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy
Hola MadWriter7 =) FallWolf here for a short review! Okay, misnomer. I am not too interested in romances. However, I will do my best to make an awesome, honest review ...
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: The New Life Program
Hola Redbox275 =) FallWolf here for a review! This work seems very symbolic. I don't know if you meant it this way, but it reminds me of the symbolic viewing ...
Feb 4, 2016 -
Re: Fawn (prologue)
Hola Beachbum =) FallWolf here for a short review Okay, I'm going to open with a critique, because this is something I really don't like; no paragraphs. Even if this ...
Jan 29, 2016 -
Re: Survivors of Lazarus Ch. 1
Hola Jpwriter =) FallWolf here for a review Okay, disclaimer, I am not always into the zombie-genre. sure, I have watched I Am Legend and love it, but usually I ...
Jan 17, 2016 -
Re: Why won't it end?
Hola AmeliaGryffin =) FallWolf here for a review This story was very interesting and imaginative! And I'm probably going to be very harsh in my review because I like it ...
Jan 16, 2016 -
Re: Ash
Hola carbonCore =) FallWolf here From the description I thought this was going to be a badly made peice, but it's actually pretty good! For starteers, this is my train ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: Under New Stars
Hola Justlittleoleme2 =) FallWolf here to give you some critique! This sounds like a really interesting story! I hope you post more of it soon =) The title piqued my ...
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: Krampus the ancient Ch. 2 new day
Hola Jpwriter! FallWolf here to give you some more tips and tricks for your story =) The plot is moving along nicely =) and I am still intrigued by the ...
Dec 3, 2015 -
Re: .
Hola HolographicLadybug =) FallWolf here for a review! This is amazing! Okay, really, that's all I can say. This is awesome. The plot, check. You have introduced the characters well, ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Young Writers Society: School of Hard Knocks
Hola Stranger =P FallWolf here to give you a [d]hopefully[/d] helpful review =) Okay, I'm with HolographicLadybug here. I so want to go to YWSSOHK! Sign me up XD I ...
Nov 29, 2015
