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Re: Scars
I love the Poem, I feel as though I can relate to it. It shows what cutters feel, why they cut. Its good to know that people actually understand, the ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Three(Rhyme Scheme Fixed)
I love this piece, mainly because I've been there, felt that. This piece shows a real-life problem with parents and their fighting around kids. I love the 3535 rhythm, the ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: you
I love Poetry, I love this work, the love and the joy that you wrote in it. Its not a very moving piece, but you connect them in a way ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: In a Matter of Seconds
Very good piece, the basic idea is great and the way you let the words flow as you step by step put someone into a position it was perfect. The ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Inquisition Chapter 1 Part 1
The distributions, the details where overall fantastic. Even though I'm not a huge fan on Si-Fi fantasy this was a great story to read, dreadfully long on the details in ...
Jan 15, 2014