FCD

Hey Firestarter, thanks for the review, First of all, Thanks for pointing out the obvious mistake of the 4 week delay in Hackel's response to the media. It was dumb ...

Yup meant to say was. Thanks for the review By the way I have posted part 2 of chapter 1, check it out if you'd like

Hi,FCD here for a quick review. I found this story intriguing. I think you did an amazing job of displaying the central character. The reader can see that the character ...

Thanks for the review man, will take what you said into account.

Thanks for the review man, will take what you said into account.

Hi Snazzy, Thanks so much for the lovely review, it was really good to see your perspective on the chapter. Thanks for pointing out the things that I could have ...