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Re: Fair-weather friend version 2!
Hi, FCD here with another review, I really liked this story. The storm analogy is exceptional. I like the way the story is spaced out, and the way you clearly ...
Oct 9, 2018 -
Re: Prologue
This prologue had an sincere effect on me. Upon finishing this chapter, I immediately wanted to continue reading. I also thought it was spaced really well, with plenty of paragraphs. ...
Oct 8, 2018 -
Re: The Roses by My Window
Hi,FCD here for a quick review. I found this story intriguing. I think you did an amazing job of displaying the central character. The reader can see that the character ...
Oct 8, 2018 -
Re: Festival Part 1
Hi, First of all, I'd like to answer your question about finishing the story. That is a no-brainer. I think this has the potential to be really good, and it ...
Oct 8, 2018 -
Re: Different - chapter one
Sup This extract really entertained me. The scenario of waking up in a foreign place is really intriguing. I like the way that you withhold information from the reader allowing ...
Sep 8, 2018 -
Re: Numb
Hi, FCD here. I'm new on this site and this was one of the pieces that caught my eye. I think that I can somewhat relate to what is said ...
Aug 30, 2018