Explosive_Pen

Thanks for the critiques! I don't know why I keep doing that with the too/to. I guess I just like O's? And I was actually planning on rewriting TEW (the ...

Thanks! I think the shalls work with the formal attitude of the poem. And yeah, it probably should be in narrative poetry... Oh well, it's too late to change that ...

Hah, nice. Thanks for making me smile.

Hah, thanks. You style seems a little dark. I would have normally turned to that direction, but I wanted to experiment with something. I wanted to give the reader hope; ...

Hah, thanks. Yes, the prologue is supposed to be histerical. You'll find out why in one of the later chapters. But thank you for pointing out the repetition and my ...

Aww, thanks! That just makes me feel so wonderfully special. It's always good to hear that someone likes my writing.

Wow. 'Twas really nice, and sweet. But it's all "I, I, I" or "You, You, You." It sounds a little selfish, what with the I want's and all. But, if ...

I liked it, though it's a bit vague. I don't really understand what is happening until about the third stanza. After that, however, it cleared up. Overall, nice job.

Wow. I really liked it, and it's so true. I loved the last lines, "I am your friend, You are my anamoly." Oh, how I can relate. Deeply touched. Amazing ...

HAH! Loved it. I admit, I am a Twilight fan, but I'm not overly-obsessed like some people are. I find it disgusting how some people just drool all over it. ...

Hah, it made me laugh. It's so true, though. There as those who can write, and those who just... can't. And clearly, you can! Nice work; keep it up!

"Why don't help me comprehend these changes in mood?" This sentence, to me, doesn't make sense. It lacks a subject, so I don't know who you're asking this of. But, ...