Explosive_Pen

Haha! I loved this! I'm literally loling. Stephenie Meyer ruined your script. This is hilarious.

Thanks, Rosey! I'll work on it.

Alrighty! I think I've got enough advice to do a rewrite so, here goes. Choking on make-up and brand names, She mouths "ugly" with a whispered breath. But I'd rather ...

Okay, so there's issues on the word "writ". It's an archaic word meaning a piece of writing, sort of like a text, but it's also a past participle of write, ...

Alrighty, so I decided I should save this poem, and here's the result: I'm not afraid of death, And I'm not afraid to live Like tomorrow's never coming. And I ...

Feminition ~ xD Yeah, I'm starting to get embarrassed about it now, hah. First chapters usually are all la-di-da-this-is-the-main-character-and-yeah-here's-the-deal-so-read-and-try-not-to-vomit-please

Chichi ~ I have played a string instrument, but I quit about two years ago because it was getting in the way of my school work. Viola. It makes the ...

Thank you! Yep, I'll play around with the rhythm (I never was good at that). And it's "just in case". :D

Hah, s'okay.

darko.demark666 ~ The stars aren't multicolored, the sky is. Which is why it says, "In a multicolored cloth woven out of night and electrons." And in the picture, the sky ...

Nate ~ Thank you! This was just a little experiment of mine; no planning whatsoever. I need to get out of that habit. Anyway, yeah, I'm told imagery is my ...

Pfft. 'Tisn't talent, 'tis just the words swimming around in my head. They align themselves; my job is to simply put them on paper. Thsnk you for your praise and ...

Honestly? No one's gonna comment on this?

Wow, glad you all think so highly of me and my poetry. Thanks for the praise and critiques and whatnot. :D

Indeed. Cheers. :D